The Moon Blinked
An eyelash of new moon
warmed to a shine
when the moon broke its gaze
and the night went blind
___________Colleen Redman / Poets and Storytellers United
An eyelash of new moon
warmed to a shine
when the moon broke its gaze
and the night went blind
___________Colleen Redman / Poets and Storytellers United
May 23rd, 2023 colleen Posted in Poetics
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May 26th, 2023 8:40 am
Now that is far too subtle and sophisticated (for all its simplicity) for AI to have crafted it!
May 26th, 2023 9:50 am
Eyelash of new moon blinding the night – quite a stormy picture
May 26th, 2023 3:16 pm
The cosmic design of dark and night is compellingly told in this one concise verse.
May 26th, 2023 4:14 pm
~~~ aren’t we glad humans can write like this. I also believe it is you! Otherwise, I will have to
re-think ChatGPT
May 28th, 2023 9:40 am
Wow , that is so tender and beautiful
June 1st, 2023 8:18 pm
This is lovely writing. If it is AI, please do not tell me.
June 1st, 2023 10:35 pm
I didn’t follow the prompt. Not NOT AI. I believe I inspired Rosemary last week when I post If Robots Wrote Poetry to use that prompt. https://looseleafnotes.com/2023/05/if-robots-wrote-poetry/