Say it Loud and Proud OUTLOUD!
The following was published in the Floyd Press on August 9, 2007.
Local poets stepped up their presence at FloydFest this year by way of a stage in the Global Village. We moved from our soapbox stand under the Poetree at the festival entrance because with continuous bands playing on two near-by stages, we could hardly hear our own alliterations. At the village stage, under the shade of a brightly striped orange tent, we had mics and room to stomp around. Our group was also featured in the Floyd Fest program, which guaranteed some festival goers would make the trek off the beaten path to attend. And they did.
The theme of the collective performance, OUTLOUD, was on woman’s issues, and there were six of us representing a variety of related subjects. Besides me, other FloydFest Poetree Players featured were Tabitha Humphrey, Bekah Parker, and fellow Floyd Writer’s Circle members Mara Robbins, Rima Sultzen, and Rosemary Wyman.
Mara, FloydFest Poetree organizer since the festival’s inception in 2002, began by welcoming the audience, introducing the collective, and giving a little background on the history of the spoken word at FloydFest.
Wearing a long hot pink scarf, I opened the show with an original poem titled “Woman: a Definition.” I’m fire and magenta … Tahitian red magma …I announced as I flipped my scarf for effect. Rosemary, adorned in another shade of pink answered from her mic, I’m murmurs and contours … I’m cradles and curbs …
Magnetic … I’m Venus … compass and radius … I countered. Our poetic conversation continued as momentum built.
Several poems were presented in this two way conversational style, others were read as a group, and a few were done solo. The most theatrical performance piece was one on perfectionism, titled “For What I’m Worth.” Written by Rosemary Wyman, mother of a blended family with eight children, it was like an abbreviated one act play.
“Where is it written that I must measure each breath I take? Why am I driven to strive for perfection? And if I am not determined to have the perfect body, make perfect grades, keep a perfect house, raise a perfect family, why am I considered a slouch … or worst of all a selfish woman?” Rosemary pondered out loud. Her performance rose to an empowering conclusion and was accompanied by the rest of the troupe who recited chorus lines and improvised movement, complete with measuring tapes and rulers as props.
The poets took on some controversial issues, but it wasn’t about dividing working mothers from stay at home ones, woman on opposite ends of the political spectrum, of different ages or lifestyles. The spirit of the performance was upbeat, meant to encourage diversity and remind us that we are all more alike than we are different.
Bekah, who works at the Women’s Resource Center in Radford shared her rousing signature poem “Rebelution” with a B. “Declaration of Independence,” a manifesto written by a 15 year old girl recovering from anorexia, was read by the group.
Tabitha Humphrey, an award winning poetry slammer gave a moving delivery of an original prose piece called “Will I be pretty?” It was a serious look with a humorous undertone at our culture’s focus on outer beauty. You’ll have porcelain skin as soon as we can see a dermatologist; you sucked you thumb that’s why your teeth look like that; you were hit with a Frisbee when you were six; otherwise your nose would be just fine. Don’t worry we’ll get it all fixed.
The poets didn’t completely abandon the soap box. It was used throughout the four day festival at a variety of venues, as Mara and other poets hopped up on it, spouting poetry like FloydFest town criers and encouraging others to do the same.
One impromptu soapbox reading took place Saturday evening at the coffee bus and was a round robin dialogue of poetic interpretations on the story of Peter Pan. Mara revived her poem, “Wendy Fallen” from the OUTLOUD performance. … Here on the island where we all wear pajamas, I’m the only one with a dress and an apron … Rosemary’s poem described Wendy sewing Peter Pan’s shadow on at his death bed. Arden Hill, an MFA Creative Writing graduate from Hollins University shared several Peter Pan poems.
From the soapbox, I shouted out to the crowd … Before I knew that a grown woman named Mary Martin was playing Peter’s part … I already didn’t want to wear a tie … Festival goers coming from a main stage musical performance stopped to listen. I was girl determined … not to be tied to a 9 to 5 … wearing panty hose and stilettos … in the middle of July … As I concluded my poem and jumped off the soap box to make room for the next poet, I imagined I was jumping off Captain Hook’s plank.
Lezlie, a poet who traveled from Charlottesville closed the soap box set with some improvised stream of consciousness poetics urging passersby to get involved in making the world a better place.
Post Note: The OUTLOUD performance will be repeated at the August’s Spoken Word Open Mic held at the Café Del Sol on August 18th from 7 – 9. Photos: 1. Rosemary and Colleen. 2. Colleen, Rima, Bekah, Rosemary, and Mara. 3. The group. 4. Mara on the poetry soap box shouts, “Attention shoppers!” See a short video clip of the tail end of Rosemary’s piece HERE.
August 12th, 2007 8:25 pm
“Bekah, who works at the Women’s Resource Center in Radford shared her rousing signature poem “Rebelution” with a B. “Declaration of Independence,” a manifesto written by a 15 year old girl recovering from anorexia, was read by the group.”
This looks very interesting…I wonder how the group did with it…
August 12th, 2007 8:46 pm
Wow, sounds like a heck of a time. I’m glad you guys got some decentattention this year round. You deserve it.
By the way I’m glad you came by my space, I would love to know more about what you think of the piece. Some real constructive criticism would be really nice. Think you could help me out?
August 12th, 2007 9:00 pm
I love the soapbox idea – kind of daring, since you’re not reading to just poets or anyone with an appreciation for poetry, but anyone who happens by, right? I love that you have a Poetree! And small town living and their newspapers are the best. Here from Michele’s.
August 12th, 2007 9:07 pm
Interesting post. Michele sent meto read it. In a hurry and I will come back and read more later.
Have a great evening. I got school now! Bye!
August 13th, 2007 8:54 am
The video was very moving…. Yet Rosemary sounds a bit angry.
Do you remember my poem FAME? It was somewhat on that subject.
August 13th, 2007 9:19 am
Was it the one where the kids laughed at clowns but you didn’t? The video came to an empowering conclusion, so what you see more in it is Rosemary being assertive in that clip, turning the situation described in her piece around. Not all the writing presented was autobiographical, yet even fiction holds the some true expression from within.
August 13th, 2007 10:12 am
look at teensy-weensy you at the end of that line….yes, it is amazing i found you in the crowd! 🙂 but, you did walk by just at the right time……
i’d like to here rosemary’s poem in its entirety. sounds like how i feel….
what a community you guys have there!
August 13th, 2007 10:36 am
How wonderful and empowering. We just can’t get poetry slams to take off here in rural Ohio. My writer’s group will continue to try, we have several very good poets.
August 13th, 2007 10:45 am
Wow! Wow! WoW! So very cool.
That looks like so much fun I can’t stand it!
Going to see the video now.
August 13th, 2007 6:14 pm
I find it interesting seeing the inside of your thinking when you are doing the outside stuff. The workings of a poets mind, something for me to ponder if I ever got the courage to talk my poetry out loud.
August 14th, 2007 7:08 am
What a fascinating post
The women of Floyd seem to be strong and supportive and a wonderful example of sisterhood
Have you ever considered having Sister’z Weekends when other women could come visit, stay at local homes and share some of this lovely stuff?
I’d fly across the Pond to join such an event
I would even bring my flute, though that could be seen as a threat rather than a promise!
August 14th, 2007 7:26 am
That first poem you mentioned sounds wonderful! Tahitian magma – what a visual!