As Wet as That
Spring sky wept
into overwhelmed puddles
Hooded jonquils huddled
like drunks at a bar
"A blog is to a writer what a canvas is to an artist." ~ Colleen Redman
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March 28th, 2009 7:46 pm
It just started raining again here… now, waiting for the promised thunderstorms. This may be the first thunderstorms since Daisy arrived so I don’t know how scared she will get with all the booming noise. But even though we had a bunch of rain this week, we need a little more… I just planted three azaleas in front… so rain away!
March 28th, 2009 10:59 pm
Hooded daffodils……I like that. I have a few of those here. It has been raining almost steadily for 2 days; very hard part of the time. I thought showers were supposed to come in April and bring May flowers!!
March 29th, 2009 6:04 am
I now sit this morning in a fleecy blanket of fog that was left after the steady rains.
March 29th, 2009 6:41 am
rainy pacific nw weather continues with no evidence of sunshine on the horizon for at least a week!
i love your post!
March 29th, 2009 9:04 am
love that drunks at a bar I can see it hahah
March 29th, 2009 3:09 pm
I really like that picture. Excellent.
March 29th, 2009 6:50 pm
Like happy drunks, I’d say! I enjoyed this poem and image.
March 30th, 2009 4:57 pm
I love that last line. I posted what someone termed “bare-knuckle” haiku yesterday. I couldn’t help it; it was what I saw and it just stuck in my mind until I got it out there.
Kat
March 31st, 2009 9:10 pm
I adore your poems.