The First Daffodil
Slumped over beauty
Blonde-headed lovely
Ahead of her time
in a crowd of closed minds
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March 13th, 2012 9:19 pm
test Ooops comments were turned off all day. Must have hit a setting by mistake.
March 13th, 2012 9:42 pm
I love the haku quality of your poem. The poem complements the wonderful photo. I’ve been lucky to see daffodils already too! They blare out Spring with their yellow.
March 14th, 2012 1:50 am
in a crowd of closed minds she blooms…ah that’s a great metaphor…we need such types of flowers that are ahead of their time and make us hungry for spring..nice..
March 14th, 2012 9:03 am
Love it!!
I have a crocus doing the same thing….only I don’t have a great poem to go with it.
March 14th, 2012 9:19 am
We had our first daffodil in January. it was very strange but wonderful.
March 15th, 2012 4:27 pm
wow, lovely. the very first points of tulips are just poking their knitting needle tops out of the soil here.
March 15th, 2012 4:44 pm
Wow, even in Canada!
March 22nd, 2012 12:08 am
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