Bookmark Moon
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Pressed like a petal
in a page of paper sky
a pale rose moon
marks the morning
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dVerse poets posting poetry HERE.
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Pressed like a petal
in a page of paper sky
a pale rose moon
marks the morning
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dVerse poets posting poetry HERE.
April 10th, 2012 colleen Posted in Poetics
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April 10th, 2012 8:44 am
BEAUTIFUL!!! I love the imagery, Colleen.
April 10th, 2012 8:49 am
You are making a collection of all of these for a book…right?
April 10th, 2012 9:00 am
I wish I could have gotten a picture of it. I saw it from the window yesterday morning, glowing pale pink as it set. I do have a collection of tea poems, I supposed moons poems should be next. I probably have 100 of them.
April 10th, 2012 12:55 pm
This is beautiful.
I have to second the idea of a moon book.
April 10th, 2012 5:25 pm
Wow, I love this!
April 10th, 2012 5:25 pm
love it…of course i love pressed flowers and equating the moon on the morn to it…love it…
April 10th, 2012 6:43 pm
This is a really lovely image… any time of the day!
April 10th, 2012 6:48 pm
Just exquisite, Colleen. Perfect economy of words, giant image.
April 10th, 2012 6:56 pm
simply wonderful – powerful painted – in a few words you bring a sudden rush of night and moonlight right from your words —
beautiful!
April 10th, 2012 7:05 pm
baby-blue indigo skies of morning
hidden among the pages
the white full moon travels
disappears
between the morning hues of dawn
and the new bright sky blue day
April 10th, 2012 7:49 pm
I want to jump up into that paper sky and read every word on it!
Great little poem, my dear in Floyd.
April 10th, 2012 7:50 pm
Wonderful imagistic poem, with such a unique twist! I can see that moon clipped to the horizon’s edge.
April 10th, 2012 9:23 pm
Delicate, lovely poem.
April 10th, 2012 11:30 pm
This is simply beaUtiful!
And so poetic.
Thank you!
April 11th, 2012 7:04 pm
Beautiful imagery captured with minimal words.
I like it lots.