The Bubble Bath
Rainbow castles
of sudsy clouds
flirt on water
flatten and float
cover my legs
in marbleized paisley
like sheer pantyhose
of creamy silk lace
_________________
~ Colleen Redman 1994
For the dVerse Poet’s Pub
Rainbow castles
of sudsy clouds
flirt on water
flatten and float
cover my legs
in marbleized paisley
like sheer pantyhose
of creamy silk lace
_________________
~ Colleen Redman 1994
For the dVerse Poet’s Pub
August 13th, 2012 colleen Posted in Poetics
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August 14th, 2012 3:34 am
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, this Poem!
August 14th, 2012 3:22 pm
ha really cool imagery…rather fun and playful as well…i like…
August 14th, 2012 3:22 pm
Wonderful metaphors for the bubbles on the water, very creative. Marbleized paisley is especially striking!
August 14th, 2012 3:52 pm
Ohhh–you caught the pattern on the water after bubbles fade so beautifully. Well done, perfect.
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August 14th, 2012 4:08 pm
Creative and lovely!
August 14th, 2012 4:11 pm
Beautiful in its vision and simplicity–Love this piece!
August 14th, 2012 4:16 pm
Nice simple observation with fresh eyes
August 14th, 2012 4:18 pm
ha nice…love the creamy silk lace…can feel the bubbles..nice..
August 14th, 2012 5:30 pm
A word painting most original and the image of marbleized paisley suds pantyhose is especially neat.
August 14th, 2012 6:10 pm
What awesome imagery! You have a talent for describing the moment. 🙂
August 14th, 2012 6:32 pm
Ahhhh, you were poetically brilliant in ’94 too!
I like me some paisley swirls in tub daily.
xooxox
August 15th, 2012 4:49 pm
Oh, wonderful imagery. I tend to spend a lot of time in the bath staring at the colours in bubbles.
August 16th, 2012 5:37 am
wonderful dreamy surreal playful with a hint of something further
August 16th, 2012 10:36 am
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August 19th, 2012 2:33 am
The Bubble Bath…ahhh I think I want one now…
covering my legs
in marbleized paisley
…great capture! Good photo too!
October 2nd, 2012 8:19 pm
I love the comparison of the bubble to clouds…and then the paisley image. That’s what I call observing!
October 3rd, 2012 7:58 pm
Wonderful imagery ! 🙂