Memo Moon
Empty sheet of moon
ripped down the middle
from night’s closed notebook of sky
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Colleen Redman 10/21/12
"A blog is to a writer what a canvas is to an artist." ~ Colleen Redman
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October 23rd, 2012 5:46 pm
this is gorgeous….love your capture of the moon and the sky…the ripped sheet makes for a very cool and honest visual…
October 23rd, 2012 6:45 pm
Sweeeet!
October 23rd, 2012 9:59 pm
Love this !
October 23rd, 2012 10:15 pm
oh i like the idea of the sky having a notebook…writing down about what he sees during the day & night…nice
October 23rd, 2012 10:27 pm
Simple. Direct. Brilliant.
October 23rd, 2012 10:32 pm
wow, so short and so full of meaning movement and meandering into a heart felt peek – i’ve reread this several times, and am now savoring it for return bites 😉 thank you 😉
October 24th, 2012 1:13 am
Wonderful, Colleen….Truly Lovely!
October 24th, 2012 7:35 am
Nice!
October 24th, 2012 3:39 pm
Of course. How else is a half moon explained? Your brevity is beautiful and has depth.