Lunar Grammar
A comma of moon
in a story of sky
punctuates the pause
between dusk and dawn
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Colleen Redman – dVerse Poetry Pub
A comma of moon
in a story of sky
punctuates the pause
between dusk and dawn
________________________
Colleen Redman – dVerse Poetry Pub
November 20th, 2012 colleen Posted in Poetics
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November 20th, 2012 3:55 pm
YES, yes and yes.
November 20th, 2012 4:40 pm
smiles…wonderful…love the play with the punctuation…and i love the pause as well in the day…
November 20th, 2012 7:30 pm
LOVE it!
November 20th, 2012 8:23 pm
One mark of poor writing is the misplaced comma. Punctuation, here, is perfect.
November 20th, 2012 8:51 pm
A wonderful write 🙂
November 20th, 2012 10:14 pm
Lovely short poem, with sharp imagery and a little push from alliteration at the end.
November 20th, 2012 10:31 pm
Lovely.
November 21st, 2012 4:06 pm
Lunar Grammar sounds like a good book title. Are you collecting up any of your pieces to make a collection?
November 21st, 2012 4:13 pm
I have a collection of moon poemettes for sure (more than 100) but I don’t know if I will ever do anything with them at this point.
November 21st, 2012 4:19 pm
so beautiful…think from now on, when i see a half-moon i will always think it looks like a comma…punctuating the pause…so cool
November 22nd, 2012 12:38 pm
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