The Moon Plays the Field
Two-faced moon
cheats on the night
Goes out for lunch
in broad daylight
It splits its time
Burns at both ends
Turns its back
on its better half
withholding
its full potential
______________Colleen Redman dVerse Poets Pub
March 5th, 2013 11:24 am
Always nice to start the day with a lighthearted poem. 🙂
March 5th, 2013 2:28 pm
LOVE the poem and the picture…!
March 5th, 2013 7:19 pm
ha…i like your play with the moon…cheating by being out int he day…yes it happens…and not always showing its full self…cool piece…
March 5th, 2013 8:43 pm
Fun 🙂 the moon cheating..very cool.
March 5th, 2013 9:10 pm
Ha! Fickle moon but I love her anyhow! Nice take on the moon!
March 5th, 2013 10:40 pm
love this – a sweet betrayal
March 6th, 2013 3:24 am
smiles… the withholding of full potential makes her even more fascinating..cool personification
March 6th, 2013 5:31 am
I like the notion of ‘the inconstant moon’ being brazen by appearing in the daytime. Nicely put together, this.
March 6th, 2013 2:35 pm
As long as it doesn’t do anything I wouldn’t do… 🙂
March 6th, 2013 7:51 pm
What a fun play on words Colleen. I love it.
March 6th, 2013 7:55 pm
Nice! Whimsical and fun and almost a little dry. 🙂
March 8th, 2013 2:05 pm
oh! i like the clever title… there is a simple beauty to this.
nice to see another virginian here at dVerse. 🙂