Moon Lounge
Laidback moon
Basking in black
A night sunbather
that burns in the dark
______________Colleen Redman______dVerse Poets Pub
Laidback moon
Basking in black
A night sunbather
that burns in the dark
______________Colleen Redman______dVerse Poets Pub
December 10th, 2013 colleen Posted in Poetics
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December 10th, 2013 12:43 pm
LIKE!
December 10th, 2013 1:09 pm
I loved the way last night’s moon was tilted back, as if it had just adjusted its lounger to better soak up the night.
December 10th, 2013 4:45 pm
oo ha…i like….i need to go look at the moon tonight and see if i can see what you see…smiles. pretty cool verse…
have a great holidays…
December 10th, 2013 5:11 pm
Very clever – I love the oblique way you show that the moon’s light is really reflected sunlight.
December 10th, 2013 5:12 pm
short and sweet!!
December 10th, 2013 6:40 pm
Wonderfully well crafted.. The basking moon.. Great lullaby for me
December 10th, 2013 6:42 pm
Well penned! So love your writing!
December 10th, 2013 7:59 pm
so had to read it twice and then Wow! I agree with Audrey!
December 10th, 2013 9:17 pm
Very nice. I love this little scene. 🙂
December 10th, 2013 9:20 pm
so much said
in so few words
nice 😉
December 11th, 2013 3:40 pm
Lovely!
Anna :o]
December 12th, 2013 2:42 pm
Loved this.
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