Moon Wax
Perpetual flame
from ember to blaze
A damped down light
fires up bright
in the belly
of a cast iron night
_________Colleen Redman_____dVerse Poets Pub
Perpetual flame
from ember to blaze
A damped down light
fires up bright
in the belly
of a cast iron night
_________Colleen Redman_____dVerse Poets Pub
December 3rd, 2013 colleen Posted in Poetics
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December 3rd, 2013 4:41 pm
Oh your have captured the early December so well in your words… very well done.
December 3rd, 2013 4:57 pm
The belly of a cast iron night…intriguing phraseology..and such iron-y!
December 3rd, 2013 5:03 pm
I love the light as we wait through the longest nights of the year–lovely writing!
December 3rd, 2013 5:30 pm
it is amazing how one little light can push back so much darkness…and give so much hope…nice imagery in this…smiles.
December 3rd, 2013 6:08 pm
Very nice!
December 3rd, 2013 6:22 pm
The cast-iron night is a wonderful image – and I am so glad it only takes a little light to push the darkness back.
December 3rd, 2013 7:04 pm
keep your light shining
raging against the darkness 🙂
December 3rd, 2013 7:09 pm
So much packed into such few words, a delight to read. x
December 3rd, 2013 9:19 pm
a light of hope..beautiful poem
December 3rd, 2013 9:43 pm
I always look forward to read your beautiful poems, I love this.
December 3rd, 2013 10:06 pm
“….cast iron night”…….Great Image, in every way…..And I can feel it, too!
December 3rd, 2013 10:35 pm
‘this wee light of mine’, well yours perfectly perfect as is the photo
December 3rd, 2013 11:03 pm
I love this. I love fire. So much warmth in this piece. 🙂
December 4th, 2013 1:09 am
Great title for a cool poem!
December 4th, 2013 10:00 am
this was just right – with good imagery, and rhyme but not sing-songy. Nice