That Time of Month
Beaming beauty
Maiden moon
From crescent bud
to fully bloomed
Thorn tipped rose
white flower of night
courts the sky
with its blossom of light
____________Colleen Redman______dVerse Poets Pub
"A blog is to a writer what a canvas is to an artist." ~ Colleen Redman
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March 11th, 2014 2:09 pm
Only you could pull this off with grace and simplicity. A minimalistic moon morphed into flora -am rather kinda fauna.
March 11th, 2014 3:18 pm
Beautiful, Colleen Really like the last stanza…and especially the ‘white flower of night.’
March 11th, 2014 3:18 pm
ah nice… i like the maiden moon… blossom of light.. never looked at her as a flower of night…so cool…loving the moon…smiles
March 11th, 2014 3:23 pm
oo i love the flower of night courting the sky…it plays well off the maiden moon….nicely played colleen….lovely….
March 11th, 2014 4:22 pm
Really love that first stanza!
March 11th, 2014 4:35 pm
I like this song of night and flowers. Quite beautiful.
March 11th, 2014 4:51 pm
Gorgeous! 🙂
March 11th, 2014 5:01 pm
I liked the gentleness of the maiden moon
March 11th, 2014 6:10 pm
I could feel myself swoon while I read this poem. Beautiful.
March 11th, 2014 6:40 pm
Wonderful rhythm and rhymes.. Really 2 full impressive stanza
March 11th, 2014 7:27 pm
Not exactly macro. I was late to the directions, but my word count worked.
March 11th, 2014 7:41 pm
LOVER-ly imagery, Colleen!
March 11th, 2014 8:25 pm
your spring, our autumn, edges of seasons are inspiring
March 11th, 2014 8:30 pm
Lovely micropoetry, and while not macro the image fits the poem perfectly! Thanks for joining in.
March 11th, 2014 9:17 pm
I like the rhyme and how the stanzas complete one another
March 12th, 2014 5:00 am
A story of love – very tender and romantic, love those comparisons.
March 12th, 2014 6:22 am
NICE!
March 12th, 2014 11:17 am
Exceptionally beautiful piece! 🙂
March 12th, 2014 11:24 am
Absolutely like the transformation here – from crescent bud to fully bloomed. Interesting visuals.
March 12th, 2014 11:27 am
Maybe time for a poem about pussy willows. We’re starting to see them here now.
March 12th, 2014 7:32 pm
Beautiful, Colleen.
March 13th, 2014 12:32 am
I find this enchanting..one of those “I wish I had written that” poems…and only hints at the hidden meaning of being a woman…;)