Commitment
Bright white heart
on night’s dark sleeve
A faithful moon
proves its loyalty
___________Colleen Redman / Imaginary Garden with Real Toads
Bright white heart
on night’s dark sleeve
A faithful moon
proves its loyalty
___________Colleen Redman / Imaginary Garden with Real Toads
June 23rd, 2014 colleen Posted in Poetics
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June 23rd, 2014 8:53 am
i love the contrast in your poem of black and white in so less words means so mucch more … beautiful!!
June 23rd, 2014 11:15 am
I agree with Arushi. Beautiful in its brevity.
June 23rd, 2014 12:04 pm
This is such an effective comparison.
June 23rd, 2014 1:45 pm
Pretty!
June 23rd, 2014 3:47 pm
Love it. I see the constant moon.
June 23rd, 2014 7:32 pm
Clean, pure, with all revision and care that goes into the ritual of commitment.
June 23rd, 2014 9:45 pm
The moon is a constant that peeps out when expected. How true! Nicely Colleen!
Hank
June 23rd, 2014 9:59 pm
Beautiful…love this description of the moon
June 24th, 2014 10:08 pm
that’s lovely
June 27th, 2014 3:05 pm
You know, I found myself looking for your supplied picture. Turns out the words contained all the Kodachrome needed to convey the imagery, the thought and sediment. Good shtufffs you.