Moon Psyche
The sun’s twin soul
casts no morning shadow
but hovers faintly over
an alter ego of cloud
______Colleen Redman / Poets United / Imaginary Garden with Real Toads
"A blog is to a writer what a canvas is to an artist." ~ Colleen Redman
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August 28th, 2016 6:21 am
Love it, CR.
August 28th, 2016 8:40 am
Lovely..
August 28th, 2016 9:46 am
beautiful!
August 28th, 2016 11:04 am
Wow!! ❤
August 28th, 2016 11:35 am
I feel the moon’s a mirror… maybe it tells us everything we want to hear.
August 28th, 2016 11:49 am
I read altar of cloud. Its Sunday forgive me.
August 28th, 2016 12:30 pm
This is very cool!
August 28th, 2016 3:19 pm
A superb poem and piece of philosophy – you remind us that some of the biggest questions in life can often not be explained or defined but lurk ever present
August 28th, 2016 5:04 pm
Beautiful!!!!! Happy Sunday!
August 29th, 2016 2:35 pm
Awesome! What more could be said :)(:
ZQ
August 29th, 2016 4:17 pm
Sweet moment.
August 30th, 2016 12:26 am
I think the moon just smiled and flipped her hair after reading your poem. Just wonderful.
August 30th, 2016 6:47 am
Lovely!
August 30th, 2016 9:31 pm
Nice!
August 30th, 2016 11:35 pm
I think it would be a nice life as alter ego of most anyone or thing not bad. One not known would be better still. The Sun, a little hot for me.
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August 31st, 2016 6:01 am
What a wonderful relationship you paint with your words.
August 31st, 2016 12:11 pm
Such a keen choice of words! This has a wow factor.
September 1st, 2016 3:16 pm
Beautiful…”alter ego of cloud”…creative