Sloshed
Spring sky weeps
into overwhelmed puddles
Hooded jonquils huddle
like drunks at a bar
_______Colleen Redman / Poets United
Spring sky weeps
into overwhelmed puddles
Hooded jonquils huddle
like drunks at a bar
_______Colleen Redman / Poets United
March 31st, 2017 colleen Posted in Poetics
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April 2nd, 2017 6:58 am
What a delightfully humorous picture you have painted with your words Colleen.
April 2nd, 2017 11:05 am
lovely!
April 2nd, 2017 12:22 pm
What a unique image of those lovely flowers…
April 2nd, 2017 12:28 pm
What a delight! So few words to engender such a huge smile!
April 2nd, 2017 12:29 pm
Ha! I really like that image of the hooded jonquils. You gave me a smile this spring morning.
April 2nd, 2017 1:04 pm
I can SEE the jonquils huddling. This made me smile in delight.
April 2nd, 2017 2:08 pm
I find the short forms so satisfying–this is exquisite!
April 2nd, 2017 2:45 pm
I know the car 🙂
ZQ
April 2nd, 2017 6:32 pm
Lovely!
April 2nd, 2017 6:47 pm
Love the humor here 🙂
April 2nd, 2017 9:25 pm
What great imagery!
April 3rd, 2017 1:10 am
Oh, great image!
April 3rd, 2017 12:43 pm
Such soggy delight!
April 3rd, 2017 10:00 pm
Perfecto -it’s raining drunks and violins outside my window this very moment.
April 4th, 2017 12:30 pm
Must have been lots of rainfall starting out this Spring!
Hank