Damp Down Moon
Last ember of night
unshaken by storm
A warm and enduring
kindle for dawn
________Colleen Redman / Poet United
Last ember of night
unshaken by storm
A warm and enduring
kindle for dawn
________Colleen Redman / Poet United
March 24th, 2018 colleen Posted in Poetics
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March 25th, 2018 9:20 am
I really like the image here, Colleen.
March 25th, 2018 9:44 am
Sheer perfection.
March 25th, 2018 10:06 am
A beautiful image of night into dawn!
March 25th, 2018 11:20 am
The kindling you describe is so welcoming!
March 25th, 2018 11:25 am
The morning always comes, so far. I also liked your pictures below of the Dali museum. I gre up near there, but have not returned since they added this structure.
March 25th, 2018 11:54 am
A moon kindling the dawn… I do love that.
March 25th, 2018 1:29 pm
I enjoyed reading. Loved the “last ember of night.”
March 25th, 2018 1:45 pm
Much conveyed in so few lines. A most enjoyable read.
March 25th, 2018 2:24 pm
beautifully done, Colleen, from ember to dawn.
March 25th, 2018 3:35 pm
It’s so vivid and fluid..beautiful !!
March 25th, 2018 4:03 pm
Wow!
March 25th, 2018 4:36 pm
Beautiful!
March 25th, 2018 7:33 pm
May it always be so–there when you need it. I love this fire and sky.
March 26th, 2018 6:01 am
This took me back many years to my childhhood in England with my brother and I taking or sleds up the hill and tobagganing down the hill hoping we didn’t go though the hedge at the bottom of the slope into the stream beyond! Lovely post.
March 26th, 2018 9:59 am
a slew of wonderful images came to mind reading this…