Honey Moon
The moon lifts its skirt
revealing its half-slip
a luminous wisp
night’s borrowed
blue secrets
___________Colleen Redman / Poets and Storytellers United
The moon lifts its skirt
revealing its half-slip
a luminous wisp
night’s borrowed
blue secrets
___________Colleen Redman / Poets and Storytellers United
October 10th, 2020 colleen Posted in Poetics
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October 11th, 2020 9:04 am
Stunning
October 11th, 2020 10:43 am
Blue secrets are the best! 🙂
October 11th, 2020 11:07 am
This makes me think of scratchy recordings and black and white movies 🙂
October 11th, 2020 11:21 am
I always suspected the moon was a glorious exhibitionist.
October 11th, 2020 2:03 pm
I loved this brief vignette. Well done!
October 11th, 2020 6:02 pm
Oh, I want to know where it borrows it’s secrets from! The exchange of stories must be something to hear,
October 11th, 2020 7:59 pm
The Moon has always been a bit of a tart since I’ve known her wth all this peeping at us from behind the clouds showing us her all!
October 12th, 2020 2:45 am
I love this flirtatious moon, Colleen!
October 12th, 2020 3:22 am
this confirms it, the moon is a tease!
this is a very lovely description of a gibbous moon.
October 12th, 2020 6:25 am
Delightful! (Also I think it’s an upside-down tanka.)
October 12th, 2020 12:32 pm
Blue secrets … intriguing. Cheers.
October 12th, 2020 4:59 pm
So few words, such gorgeous visuals
October 14th, 2020 11:29 am
Oooo-la-la!