Moon Curves
Girdled moon
Cinched crescent
Loosens the tight fit
of its growing luminescence
_________Colleen Redman / Poets and Storytellers United
Girdled moon
Cinched crescent
Loosens the tight fit
of its growing luminescence
_________Colleen Redman / Poets and Storytellers United
March 20th, 2021 colleen Posted in Poetics
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March 21st, 2021 2:13 am
Wonderfully visual and gorgeously worded!
March 21st, 2021 4:35 am
An amazing image of the moon loosening her girdle, Colleen, in preparation for spring!
March 21st, 2021 7:25 am
Waxing Gibbous Sunday. Love this 1st Quarter love poem, CR. Have a great day!
March 21st, 2021 10:53 am
I agree with Rosemary, the visuals are just stunning. And I love that the whole poem reads like a luminous sigh.
March 21st, 2021 3:53 pm
Your word-mastery is showing again — as it always does. This is so beautifully penned.
March 21st, 2021 4:39 pm
And to think: By reading your poem, I don’t even have to go outdoors to see the moon. It’s right here in a handful of words. Awesome!
March 21st, 2021 5:44 pm
This is fantastic, especially for being so brief! Your words make the moon-curves even more gorgeous! <3
March 21st, 2021 7:48 pm
I can feel the happy sigh of relaxation as the moonlight spills forth.
March 22nd, 2021 1:45 am
a great visual.
brief but gorgeous!