When the Moon Turns Pale
Astonished moon
looks down with surprise
as if just discovering
its fear of heights
___________Colleen Redman / Poets and Storytellers United
Astonished moon
looks down with surprise
as if just discovering
its fear of heights
___________Colleen Redman / Poets and Storytellers United
December 19th, 2021 colleen Posted in Poetics
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December 19th, 2021 12:05 pm
What a lovely way to describe a pale moon. 🙂
December 19th, 2021 12:31 pm
What a delight!! Sending greetings of good cheer to you this Holiday Season!
December 19th, 2021 4:17 pm
Such a delight! Both words and image. Thank you that my day starts with a smile.
December 19th, 2021 4:53 pm
Love the feast of imagery your pale moon brings to mind. I can see her gasp… all the way up there in the sky. Beautiful poem, Colleen.
December 21st, 2021 9:10 am
Your tiny poem brings a smile to my face. Well done! Merry Christmas!
December 22nd, 2021 8:00 am
Nice work, just like all your work this year Colleen, may 2022 just fly to the moon! Peace and joy at this turning of the year!
December 24th, 2021 1:42 am
Such original personification!
December 26th, 2021 1:34 am
That guy looks very hesitant!!
I hope your Christmas was
Merry and that you will have
a Happy New Year.
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December 27th, 2021 6:05 pm
I love a moon framed by trees but never thought that it could be afraid of heights until now. :0