Goodnight Moon
Moon under my pillow
is a princess’s pea
I cross my heart
and hope to dream
_________Colleen Redman / Poets and Storytellers United
"A blog is to a writer what a canvas is to an artist." ~ Colleen Redman
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November 10th, 2023 1:15 am
Short and strong Sweet dreams
November 10th, 2023 4:15 am
A beautiful night to wander away in dream
November 10th, 2023 6:52 am
I love that analogy… the moon as the princess’ pea!
November 10th, 2023 7:17 am
*Smile.* Yes, it’s just as effective in stopping one from sleep. But I like to remember that the moon is the muse of poets, and think that being bathed in its light is giving me inspiration.
November 10th, 2023 9:18 am
I like the twist of enchantment you gave to old saying and familiar fairytale.
November 10th, 2023 2:49 pm
A pea sized moon with do the trick nicely, sweet dream
November 11th, 2023 1:14 pm
How charming. Four lines leaving me with a smile and a sigh. You have a wonderful way of making that happen, Colleen.
November 15th, 2023 11:57 am
Beautifully written, Colleen. I love the pea under your pillow.