Moon Duo
I. Moon Drowning
Swallowed whole
in one gulp
by a wave of clouds
the moon was engulfed
II. Magic Trick
Behind a curtain of fog
the moon’s half cup
flipped face-down
by sun-up
__________Colleen Redman / Poets and Storytellers United
"A blog is to a writer what a canvas is to an artist." ~ Colleen Redman
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February 2nd, 2024 1:32 am
I enjoyed that trick
February 2nd, 2024 1:41 am
Not right here, but I like your moon being drowned. Novel, I’d like to have seen it then.
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February 2nd, 2024 1:54 am
We have clear skies and fat moons… the temps are already climbing..it’s going to be a hot hot el-nino driven February through September!
February 2nd, 2024 2:41 am
Lovely! Such great instant visuals.
February 2nd, 2024 5:24 am
An interesting read. Good imagery that clouds engulfed the moon.
February 2nd, 2024 8:04 am
Nicely imagined … swallowed by a cloud but not digested. 🙂
February 2nd, 2024 8:09 am
Very vivid words & expression!
February 2nd, 2024 2:46 pm
I completely support all this celestial eating and drinking. Delicious.
February 2nd, 2024 5:30 pm
Magic, pure and simple.
February 6th, 2024 4:08 pm
Fabulous imagery! I loved picturing this.