"A blog is to a writer what a canvas is to an artist." ~ Colleen Redman

In the Driver’s Seat

I used to dream of flying
and then falling
I marveled that I never
hit bottom
and never died

Now I dream that I wake up driving
I can’t see the road
and don’t know where I’m going

Sometimes I’m driving in a city
down residential streets
with cars parked on either side
and an unhelpful rider
in the passenger seat

Sometimes I’m driving in reverse
and it’s all going by too fast
I need to pull over
I NEED TO PULL OVER
I arrive
but I never crash

___________Colleen Redman / Poets and Storytellers United /dVerse Poets Pub

10 Responses | Add your Own

  • 1 Rosemary Nissen-Wade:

    Wow, I have had each of those dreams! (Though not for a very long time.) Now I am wondering if they are common to many.

  • 2 Rall:

    OK….
    one mug of hot chocolate milk with a huge dollop of Irish Baileys before bedtime…you’ll be dreaming of dancing the Viennese waltz with Colin Firth 🙂

  • 3 dsnake1:

    A time of insane traffic and unknown destinations?

  • 4 Rommy:

    There is a lot of comfort in arriving in the dream, but I could do without the fear and uncertainty of the trip.

  • 5 Kim:

    I used to have a dream where my 6 year old son was driving…,,

  • 6 colleen:

    I once ran over a boy with a mack truck. One of my worst ever dreams!

  • 7 Dwight L. Roth:

    Oh, I have had these dreams as well. Very scary indeed. Driving in the dark and then a fog comes in and you are moving but have no idea whether you are on the road or not. And then there is driving up as steep hill and getting half-way to the top I can’t go any further and can’t back down!!

    A great poem Colleen!

  • 8 msjadeli:

    Good comparison. Vehicles in dreams always have important messages for the dreamer. I’m sorry the driver is disoriented, but they have not crashed, which is good.

  • 9 Björn:

    These dreams bridging the gap between bliss and nightmare make me want to wake up in the end.

  • 10 Andrew Wilson:

    I thought dreams of flying, or is it falling, were meant to be about sex but I don’t know what driving dreams signify or whether they are an improvement or a down-grade Colleen – if you place any store by these things…

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