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Like a purple flock
of drenched finches
early blooming crocus
hold tight to secrets
_____Part 2 HERE /_____________Colleen Redman / Poets United
Like a purple flock
of drenched finches
early blooming crocus
hold tight to secrets
_____Part 2 HERE /_____________Colleen Redman / Poets United
March 1st, 2018 colleen Posted in Poetics
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March 4th, 2018 10:11 am
Ah…so sweet. Dressed in their purple frocks.
March 4th, 2018 11:30 am
Love how your descriptions sing of spring and blooming to come…
March 4th, 2018 11:31 am
Love the description….thankfully mine are tight underground as we were buried with over a foot of snow.
March 4th, 2018 11:50 am
The crocusses are up here too, which is always a delight.
March 4th, 2018 12:40 pm
This is so lovely!? I love the image of those blooming crocus holding secrets.
March 4th, 2018 1:10 pm
holding tight waiting for the right moment and then that standing ovation of light overflowing – lovely !
March 4th, 2018 1:11 pm
Superb piece
March 4th, 2018 4:06 pm
I love the crocuses closed for secrets. I never thought of them that way before.
March 4th, 2018 6:06 pm
A perfect snapshot in words, to match the visual image … and so much more than a mere snapshot. It made my toes curl in delight.
March 5th, 2018 5:57 am
The crocuses look beautiful. Sadly they would only grow in winter here.
March 5th, 2018 6:16 am
early blooming crocus
hold tight to secrets
Yes, they hold on to what they know. It makes it all the more interesting!
Hank
March 5th, 2018 9:24 pm
Lovely tight poem…beautiful imagery here.
March 8th, 2018 1:48 pm
Oh yes….. both parts are beautiful phoetry.